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Gone Again...

You long for her
Like I've longed for you
From the first time
You dropped me for her
I knew
And every time
You’ve dropped me since

You miss me
Now and then
When she’s not there
Or you’re in despair
And you know I’m here
But when she’s back
You’re gone again

I’ve grown a shell
To deflect the pain
You’d never know
How much I feel
How much I think
How I don’t sleep
So I won’t dream of you


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  • Hoosierpoet silver member
    March 3
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    This is so touching, but is too often true in this less than perfect world. So many times the grass may look greener elsewhere for the men, when what they really want is right there in front of their eyes, if they can only learn to appreciate the love coming their way.

    Moses


  • Guerrero
    November 18, 2008

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    i know its incredibly hard, but you should try and find someone else..this person is only toying with your love and you deserve better.. but greast poem..


    • loualoui
      November 19, 2008
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      Ah thank you. This is about a relationship that's over... but hearts mend slowly.