The wind plays to me a sweet melody
The leaves whisper in a golden voice
As I lie drowning in blissful insanity
Of listening to the music, I have no choice.
The melody stealthily creeps into my mind
Strangling all other feeling and thought
Engulfed by the melody, enchanted by music
The true essence of beauty, masterfully caught.
Sweet melody, sing to me, sway in the breeze
Dance through the night, to the capturing tune
Calm and lull me to sleep with the flow and charm
Sweet melody sing to the powerful, rising moon.
Author notes
My username is Sekhmet Kitty and the option I chose was.....
Option 4. Sweet Melody, the meaning of my real life name.. write something about it
Hope you like!
A contest entry
- Options, Quotes. by LoveDeprived.
700 points, ended December 1, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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oh dear i forgot to comment on this write, i just noticed this while i was getting ready to judge the contest arghhh, my bad... okay now hmm.. it may not be what i wanted, but certainly! this is grrr so amazing, short, impactful, full of meaning, imagery of course me likes! who doesnt?
oh and rhyme; has a good flow, gosh, i <3 rhymes makes poems more fun to read. by "sweet melody" it does not necessarily have to be music but, in this case you just blend, enrich the meaning and depth of the prompt and you did a very splendid job at it...
much deserved claps!
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Wow, great poem! I love music, and this is a wonderful way to describe it. Good job!
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