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Lytling Ho Lytling!



She runs, playfully mocking me,
Laughing, jesting, the lytling she is!
Blasphemy dies ‘neath her smile;
Tyranny prisoner in her folly.

Imaginings breathe air, come alive
She and her shadow chasing the tots
--over clouds and starry ganders
--under droplets of lucent dreams.

Play she, play I, close infants dear
Both eyes be mirrors to souls,
Then ‘lo (behold) mirrors are we;
Me from another time, some other soul

Light creeps under covers to shush shade,
The lytling escapes with her kins
--neath the cloudy mattress and adult ganders
--hidden and bearing the jar of lucent dreams…

Covered in shade’s cloak with her follies
Teasing and grinning as if won a feat!
The lytling, sweet lytling…
My childhood friend—the inner me

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  • Victory Gin silver member
    November 25, 2008
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    This certainly has a spry fay quality to it. I love how you ended this poem. Lovely.


  • Grunts Girl silver member
    November 18, 2008
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    shush the shade... that was lovely