If the winter snow turned into water
like..
a dirty newspaper without owner,
a train caved in fog on swayed platform,
with its hundreds of sources seeking bail
from the fantasy of luminous announcements,
noise of bombs without mercy of fire,
the night falls on top
slab of sky without stars,
every lost moment between the streets
where all alone in the world spend strangely,
a tree without leaves,
the way without people,
again, like yesterday,
like tomorrow,
perhaps because like all the days to come,
if they really come,
I'll melt in solitude..
deep deep in silence.
Author notes
~spiritualangel~
Prompt: Snow and Winter thoughts/pollution
This is about thoughts that if the snow melts in winter ( a reverse position against season) then what anything can be done except protesting against all the pollution caused by human negligence to disturb the God's creation..
A contest entry
- Hope(ful) Snowy Nights by SilentMoonlight.
1500 points, ended December 11, 2008, 11 entries
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This is definetly a topic not many people write about - I like it when people write things like that
The descriptions you used were fabulous and seemed very driven. It flowed with a natural ease that made me hurry through this write without even realizing I was doing it.
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