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The Haunting

 

Danger all around,
raging storms up ahead -
no escape from this place.
 

 

 

Screaming for mercy,
but only to hear lightning....


Ancient history,
unlocks -

revealing the past.

 

Demons lash out,
causing psychotic episodes.

 

 

Foggy images of young lovers appear,
only to be stopped within seconds.

 

 

A scream from hell is heard -

and the lovers vanish,
just as a ship in the distance leaves...

 

 

From that day on,
storms rage -

while lost souls haunt the place,
if you touch that unholy ground -
you vanish just like them,
and never seen again...

 

 

 

Author notes

I used all of the pictures.

Picture credit One http://yamichi.deviantart.com/art/home-86290212

Picture Credit Two
http://skye-luna.deviantart.com/art/Ghosthouse-92040001

Picture Credit Three
http://helleye.deviantart.com/art/Ghost-In-The-Fog-45914876

Picture Credit Four
http://densss.deviantart.com/art/Ghost-Ship-57037208

Picture Credit Five
http://lady-dementia.deviantart.com/art/The-Haunting-68888885

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Comments

  • Ylova silver member
    December 11, 2008

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    Wow! I love how you mixed all of the prompts and came up with this stunning piece. Absolutely incredible. You are so talented! Congratulations on the Bronze in Manda's contest.
    Keep it flowing

    Much love
    Ylova


  • Desire gold member
    December 5, 2008

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    Wowzers~

    You are so good at these type of contests- able to weave all the images and bring to Life a story~
    Bravo!! Love how You presented this
    Adorable background too
    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo

    Excellent~
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    December 5, 2008

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    Wowzers!
    I am in awe that you used each picture and brought them to life and in perfect sync with each other


    Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda

  • Valley Girl silver member
    November 19, 2008

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    Wow sis! Awesome take on all of the prompts! Gold place for sure!!