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Seasons we meet ( HM )

Numbering the months as we turn the seasons upon a clock,

she ticks time,

blink! yet we cannot see.

 

We breathe, inhale the mist of the morning,

the dew crystals at dawn,

sun rises, east.

Follow loves new dreams, begin....

 

Running together, laughter in the rain,

showering the smiles,

uniting hearts remain.

 

We breathe, inhale the mist of the morning,

the dew crystals at dawn,

sun rises, east.

Follow loves new dreams, begin...

 

Amber sunsets light at dusk,

illuminating our silhouettes,

wrapped warmly embracing two.

 

We breathe, inhale the mist of the morning,

the dew crystals at dawn,

sun rises, east.

Follow loves new dreams, begin...

Author notes

~ The song, You picked me, By : A fine Frenzy.

http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=MQERADqSD2g

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  • Writeous
    February 12
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    truly a lyrical piece indeed....lovin' this!!!!!


  • Angelflower
    December 11, 2008

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    this was so beautiful, truly lyrical indeed. you really took the prompt and ran with it, thank you very much for sharing, best of luck in the contest.

    Angel


    • Reptile Lady gold member
      December 11, 2008
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      Thank you Angel for hosting this invite contest
      I loved writing all those poems
      this one especially
      Take care hun
      Julie x


  • storiesuntold gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    Very good write here

    I so love the way you write such wonderful mistures of your words in a way it touches the heart of the readers


  • Abe 1
    November 20, 2008

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    WOWZA a song lyrical perfection
    luv it luved it
    ope ya do well this is fab keep um coming
    cheers abe


  • maralisa silver member
    November 19, 2008

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    wow I love this poem your imagery is delightul my favourite stanzas are four through to the last good luck in the contest my friend take care maralisa


  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 18, 2008
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    Lovely write

    I so love the air with the rising of the day when whispers are sent in droplets of mist to kiss the face and wake the senses of the heart


  • chilali
    November 18, 2008

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    Wow. This is awesome. A Fine Frenzy is one of my favorites!! I love them and this poem is just beautiful! I love that song! Hehe. Good luck in the contest! This is definitely GOLD!

    Much love
    Ylova


  • aboomer silver member
    November 18, 2008
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    Lovely!!
    best wishes in your contest.


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    November 18, 2008
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    aww this is truly beautiful!! I love it!!! Such lovely words!!! You did an incredible job sis!!!


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    November 18, 2008

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    Mum I love this poem so much.. This is now my favorite favorite of all of your poems. lyrical Mum..beautiful indeed.. You did an awesome job..

    good luck


  • daviscth silver member
    November 18, 2008

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    Sis, reading this gave me the feeling of snuggling in a clean cotton sheet with a cup of coffee. LOL. Don't ask why, I don't have a clue. But I loved the imagery. This is an awesome piece of work.
    Good luck in the contest.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    November 18, 2008

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    Awesome lyrics sis! I can just imagine this to music Beautifully done with superb imagery as ever! Good luck in the contest


  • Alyzeh
    November 18, 2008

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    I love 'A Fine Frenzy' ... some amazing songs by them and this is just lovely! It's so beautiful...with great imagery..just makes me so dreamy...

    Stunning Julie.. superb


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    November 18, 2008

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    Wow!!! Love this...

    Beautiful imagery & so full of love & the reflection of it...
    Subtlely sensual and lasting in its expressive narrative & visualisation...
    Yet another fantastic write...
    Well penned, well versed, well done!!!


  • thejollytinker
    November 18, 2008
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    Neglected to check the song prompt- don't need it. Lyrical, indeed!

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