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Picture As a Pick

Take pity on star-crossed lovers
They not know what has been writen in the clay
She tells him that she wants to be a mother
Then she takes her things and walks away

Why did she leave
Will she ever know
Oh where, where can she be
Oh somebody please tell me where did she go you...
Oh will you will you please

Tell me, oh tell me where did she go

So they've found their way back together
At the peak of their lives
And shes got a different mind set
And she still got that beatiful smile

Why did she leave
Will she ever know
Oh where, where can she be
Oh somebody please tell me where did she go you...
Oh will you will you please

Tell me, oh tell me where did she go


What ever happened to the star crossed lover
So happily dreaming of the other
What happened to the want-a-be mother
And promiseing father standing above her

Why did she leave
Will she ever know
Oh where, where can she be
Oh somebody please tell me where did she go you...
Oh will you will you please

Tell me, oh tell me where did she go

Oh but can't not you tell me
tell me tell me

Where did they go?
Where did they go?
MMMMHM where they'd go
Where did she go?

But please sombody tell me where
Where did they go?

Author notes

Apr 8, 2006
title=a picture that i had laying around that was in shape of a guitar pick of my ex

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  • bloved
    November 18, 2008

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    I really like this one...it has a very "sing-song" pattern, assumining that this is a a set of lyrics (there is repeativeness in the chorus).

    Plus I like how this piece is really open and raw, I can really feel what you are going through.