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Feelings

In Two seconds
My life changed

It was a normal sunny day
I was walking downa leaf shrewn road
Next to the man I love
When he suddenly stopped
Looked at me with his Golden Brown eyes
And gets down on one knee in front of me

"James, Will you marry me?"
So many feelings
Rushing through my veins
Flooding my head
Happiness and excitment that he wants too...
A smile
Then a frown
I've remembered something
Drepression and Anger that we Can't

"Matthew, yes I will marry you..."
But he won't let me finish.
As the day rolls on
Three questions keep stompong around in my brain...
How?
When?...
and Where?

Confusion is all I'm left with
At the end of everyday.............

Author notes

If you don't read my page... My name is James and I am a Bisexual individual... Matthew is my current lover. Please don't leave hateful comments.

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  • Simone Brooklyn
    November 25, 2008

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    I have mad respect for you. This poems topic is something that is very overlooked by many people, but it's always in the minds of others. This truly comes from your heart. Good luck in my contest, and good job.