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the start of it all

my  body rises  to the touch of your cold skin
I want you to hold me in that deadly embrace
to come back and rise with you
my queen  of the night
I will never be able to see the sunrise
but dear one that's what I want
take my sacred seed
make me invinsible like you
i want to see forever with you

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  • Umi Juvariel
    April 9

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    This was very different, but still well done. I liked the concept of an invisible love. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.