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My Heart

My heart
Is Broken
THROWN to the Ground
Forgotten

The last time
I heard you say
"I Love You James"
Was months ago

I miss the way we used to kiss
I miss the way we used to cuddle for hours
And I really miss
The outgoing side of you I fell in love with

You aren't Yourself
And you know it
You shattered my heart
And you don't even care

My heart
Is Broken
THROWN to the Ground
Forgotten

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