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predator

i said my true age
and i used my real name
not thinking that it would matter
and he spoke to me so sweetly
but i said we would not meet
i wasn't quite that stupid
but he replied he knew who i was
i started getting text's
and email's when i had not given an address
i started to freak
and i asked some one for help
they shut down my computer
wiped off all my files
i had to change my number
but i am still afraid
that this person so easily
nearly caught up to me
i dont wish to think what would have happened
After watching all those stories on the news
but still everyone thinks

It will not happen to me
  so it dosnt matter...

Author notes

i was smart enough to know when something was wrong...so many others aren't i fear for them.

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  • Lucian Valcor
    December 10, 2008

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    lovely poem very written and the story you portray is horrific and would freak any one out again well done and thank you for entering

    Lucian"


  • Snowing Kisses silver member
    December 1, 2008
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    hey great write, scary thooughts though, glad you were smart, and kept safe


  • fairywings09
    November 19, 2008
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    hey! You did good on this one. I think it is swell that u get this thing into reality, b/c yeah so many people think that it is NEVER goign to happen to them and it so does. It goes on and so many people are unaware and it is just insane adn so scary!! Its just so interesting to think at how so many just dont get it. Keep up what ur doing! You are doing so well ^_


  • Arkbear gold member
    November 18, 2008

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    Scary stuff penned here.....and as a Father, I encourage you to watch yourself and beware of whom you speak to......some great words to ponder here....and yes, they talk soooo sweeeeet, and then WHAM, you are in the grips of someone not fully intack mentally.....I am so proud of your for realizing the dangers which lurk all around us......thank you so much for entering and supporting this contest -

     

    May your Higher Power bless you & protect you -

     

    Your score shall be sent to your Host,

     

    Bear -

     

     


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 18, 2008

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    that is good but can i get his email, i have some things i would like to talk to him about, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest

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