My heart is cheating on you,
it can no longer stay true.
Every time a guy walks into my view,
it tells me that you and I are through.
But my brain won't go there,
it wants, what seems to be fair.
But my eyes, don't seem to care,
when I picture him in his underwear.
I really know all of this is silly,
and that I've become so chilly.
But nothing can change what I feel,
'cause I no longer know what's real.
But maybe you and I can make a deal,
something that addresses our own appeal.
'Cause I am up and I am down,
my thoughts are all around.
My feelings cannot be found,
my heart sewn to the ground.
But I need my space and time,
so that I can find peace of mind.
To know that you are really mine,
and we are meant to be entwined.
So as our story comes to an end,
I hope you know, you're a good friend.
To deal with me over and over again,
giving me space because you understand.
Author notes
written for contest.
A contest entry
- Excuses, Excuses, Excuses, WHATCHA GOT SOBER OR OTHERWISE by Disturbed Prodigy.
7000 points, ended December 5, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Do what you like.. I am not your brain...
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This could actually be an excellent song! I could hear it in my head! Lol, great write! (But what else is new?)
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that is really funny because i do write songs.. ill take a look at it. i think i used one of my song lyrics in it
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same thing happened to me, i keep looking at guys and seeing them in their underwear and well i think she couldn't take it, i like this poem, it is honest, and if you were in my brain, i am sorry, there are things in there no human should know of
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amen to that. hahaha yeah its pretty bad. im conflicted..
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smooth talking DAWG!
like hell ..we women or men understand,
and that my friend
was a clever write and damn
pitiful and oddly brillant excuse!
for your "cocky" views.
laughing...great write!
cleverly done!
you dawg!
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hahaha it truly was pitiful.. oh well. its what i got off the prompt. hopefully your friend enjoys it. i like the other write better
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