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Starving over my masterpieces

Roses are red,
  hobos drink beer.


What must I do for you to appreciate my work,
  cut off my ear?

 

 

 

 

 

 

Was there to much... "assonance"?

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  • Bob Fox
    December 13, 2008

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    Oh boy

    Tis the truth about AP. Sex sells. Lies gather readers . Bullshit talks & good poets either learn to kiss ass of never get noticed. Post a picture of a hottie & they [readers] shall come. lol


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    November 23, 2008

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    Colorful starvation!!


  • Kari gold member
    November 18, 2008
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    haha cute lol maybe spelling 'off' correctly would help