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I Said She Loves Me, So Why Not I Love Her

I wish I were there
Not be captured here
I regret not saying
The most important thing
Just a little sooner
It doesn't matter
Now that we're together I feel so...
The dots are for the word I don't know
I could spend all day
Writing this page away
Looking through the eye glass of time
I know that you are mine
As much as I know that I am yours
Divided my heart in more the fours
Through our coming struggle
At least I know we can always be subtle
Discrete like we used to
But only when I'm with you
My chest is warm
My mind isn't torn
Flipping through the dusty pages
Of memories of our stories stages
I remember close
And when we removed our clothes
Just to lay together
And feel a little closer
Without something in the way
Know I love you each and every day
I just want some cold
I thought I was being bold
My enter toil
All became foil
When you said you believed in love
And it all because of my love
Squeek, Slippery, and all out little secrets
You'll always mean more then a fifth
As I looking at our relationship at a glance
I just wanted to thank you, for giving a chance

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to my fiance taylor

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  • Angel Eyed Baby
    November 18, 2008

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    Aww.


    You know, I really liked this so much. She must be a wonderful girl. I am glad you found some one who you really love this much and care for. I found that someone in my life as well.. his name is Jason. The last line of your poem is just like something I would write to him. The words are powerful. I enjoyed reading this.

    ~Autumn~