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We the People 11/04/2008

At the precipice of impossible
Drowning in a sea of white hatred
Clutching the lessons taught in schoolbooks
Each time shredded at the polls

Bloodied hands...skinned knees
Crawling dodging the lying masses
The American Dream raped by the Mason Dixon line

American Dream? You are mistaken..it is only for me and mine
Silly girl! Those founding fathers didn't mean you!!
Those heroes? They are pages in an old satchel
Don't think you deserve a place

Just as we did to Martin and John...we'll put you down

But, me and mine we've grown strong
  from the beatings
  from the cheatings
  from the ignorance

I have never believed in you and me
Only We
We the People
We the forsaken
We will overcome

At the precipice of impossible
Swimming in a sea of believers

We
have nothing to lose
have come to take our place
are legion
are the American Dream


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  • briareus gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    New Democratic vistas, uttering again the word en-masse, reverberation of fault-line slippage, listening for the harmonics or dissonance of change...


  • PoesyPeruser
    November 27, 2008

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    A inspiring write! Yes it is our time and we will keep up the fight until equality is acknowledged!
    I love the action words, "drowning, clutching, dodging, crawling, swimming. It gives this poem so much depth.


  • tumultuous
    November 24, 2008

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    viva la revolution!

    "American Dream? You are mistaken..it is only for me and mine
    Silly girl! Those founding fathers didn't mean you!!
    Those heroes? They are pages in an old satchel
    Don't think you deserve a place"


    This speaks to me


    • IronMaiden1236
      November 25, 2008
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      Hi

      Sorry, I don't remember getting this in my inbox...thank and yes Viva La Revolucion!!!!