ok so maybe i shouldn't of had that many
the room stopped spinning when i hit the floor
and the coffee table, yep there's the lump
just came in out of the rain
from the Halloween party of shame
walking around in jeans and lingerie
when i told my friend the joke
he was the only one who got it
i think he had just as much to drink
i was dressed as my brother
the joke...
well i guess it was me..
Author notes
i havn't been back to my friends place since the party...oh shame
A contest entry
- Excuses, Excuses, Excuses, WHATCHA GOT SOBER OR OTHERWISE by Disturbed Prodigy.
7000 points, ended December 5, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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see that always happens to me when i where my lingerie out, i don't know why, love the poem, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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oh..man!
That had to hurt....
Sending you an ice-pack,
and two tylenol!
and well,
you'll just have to not borrow
your brothers lingerie anymore!
loved your poem, thankyou for your entry
and sharing your humanity!
way to write!
ears/Seattle
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