tumbleweed ...@
on ocean of sand
no place to go
Author notes
movement
In a list
A contest entry
- The Secret of Life by Olivias Violin.
550 points, ended December 6, 2008, 26 entries
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This is interesting and different.
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Lovely and creative haiku dear sir...you do write with such wonder and originality...
love the tumbleweed...wonderfully you!
mystic
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This is good, original Giving me something to think about.
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How unique, and your @ does look like a tumbleweed, while mine looks more like an ear. lol.Definitely felt the movement in this. That feeling of going nowhere.
Excellent haiku.
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oh, I see my 'at' looks like a tumbleweed too now that I post it.
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lol... now you see what i see
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