There's no need to speak
No room for words,
For the magic of bonding
Is as pure as the soul.
When two eyes meet, a story starts.
When two hands are together, everything sparks.
A soft touch is hard to describe, but easy to feel.
There's no room to think, no room for fear,
For everything around two people, is but magnificent.
I tell you my feeling with a blink of an eye,
And you tell me your's with a soft-clean smile.
You see my friend, there's no space limit when two are together.
Bonding is holding you tight
Smelling your perfume
And kissing you every-night...
A contest entry
- Can you hear me now? by darell.
500 points, ended December 1, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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So sweet
Although this was very precious
it doesn't answer the need for a
long lasting relationship.
When couples first meet there are
always sparks and birds singing.
Everything seems so perfect because
a need for physical intimacy takes
precedent over everything else.
The reality is that after awhile
you come down off of cloud nine and
you need much more than emotions to
sustain a strong and lasting relationship.
Communication is essential. without it
the relationship fades into obscurity.
Thanks for your entry. Best wishes
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Indeed...
What you speak of ir true...however, when I mentions that two eyes meet, I don't mean to say "it only happend on the first time, or when you meet a person for the first time"...What I mean to say, what that means to me, is that as time trasends, when "love" is eal you will always feel such emotions. I'm not saying that everything will be like a dream. No, I do know for a fact that everything chnages and doesnt saty still, however, this "poem" is to measure the time one falls in love and not the time when love ends...thnk you for your comment I really appreciate it!...
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Such a clean, simple little write, but telling a deep message. Those quiet times of communion are special bonds of understanding. I'm not really the chatty type, but a word, a wink can speak volumns. The empty space filled with the energy of love.
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Thank you
Thank you for your comment glad you like it...
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