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Sunshine after the Rain

I touched your face through a veil
With windy seas and stormy skies
As we walked along the shore

And I couldn't believe my eyes
You looked so beautiful standing there
As rain clouds danced about and more

Then you took me by the hand
And we ran along the shore
Leaving footprints in the sand

And you asked me once again
Will there be blue skies and sunshine
And I said after the rain
Sunshine after the rain
Then you whispered my name

I asked you why you loved me
And you whispered me your reply
Love is like the raindrops
That often fall from open skies
And for every storm that follows
The sun will shine again
Like my love for you forever
Just like sunshine after the rain

I now know why we're together
It's a love that will last forever
Just like sunshine after the rain

And you asked me once again
Will there be blue skies and sunshine
And I said after the rain
Sunshine after the rain
Then you whispered my name X 2



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  • Guerrero
    June 3

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    aww. this is so heart touching.. i love it. your love is strong.. i like the veiw and thought behind it.. great write


  • JinSays gold member
    November 22, 2008
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    I asked you why you loved me
    And you whispered me your reply
    Love is like the raindrops
    That often fall from open skies
    And for every storm that follows
    The sun will shine again
    Like my love for you forever
    Just like sunshine after the rain



    very pretty,

    Thank you for your entry, and I wish you all the best.
    jin

  • harriet567
    November 18, 2008

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    Beautiful

    Beautifully written, lyrical and atmospheric. Good use of repetition. I especially like the words in the 5th verse "Love is like the raindrops that often fall from open skies, And for every storm that follows, the sun will shine again". I love the first line that sets the scene for the whole poem.