Permit me
one sweet kiss.
Permit me
to meet your lips.
Close as I can
be to you,
entwined as I can
One becomes two.
That moment we share
a moment for life
without it can i bare
the regret in rife?
Author notes
gosh, sometimes time IS running out
Comments
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i like when you write short.. somehow you make all the necessary emotions appear in the pieces you wrote in such short lines and that's an art!


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thanks!! haha I dont know its funny how i write short!
thanks for calling it an art! *blushes*
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a kiss is a very powerful thing, and well done, you've got those thoughts that wizz through your head at the moment before a kiss exactly, really well done x
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yeh it is quite powerful ! im glad it spoke to you my dear!
always satisfying
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