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Can I kiss you?

Permit me
one sweet kiss.
Permit me
to meet your lips.

Close as I can
be to you,
entwined as I can
One becomes two.

That moment we share
a moment for life
without it can i bare
the regret in rife?

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gosh, sometimes time IS running out

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  • SweetZsKuLLy
    November 18, 2008

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    i like when you write short.. somehow you make all the necessary emotions appear in the pieces you wrote in such short lines and that's an art!


    • Veritas-
      November 18, 2008
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      thanks!! haha I dont know its funny how i write short!
      thanks for calling it an art! *blushes*


  • Talitha777
    November 17, 2008

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    a kiss is a very powerful thing, and well done, you've got those thoughts that wizz through your head at the moment before a kiss exactly, really well done x


    • Veritas-
      November 18, 2008
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      yeh it is quite powerful ! im glad it spoke to you my dear!
      always satisfying