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Reflections of a sick girl

Looked in the mirror , saw a face
But she didnt look back at me

She wasn't smiling, wasn't crying
When I looked, what did I see?

For eyes, I saw two big black holes
Her skin was grey and blue

She then turned to me, looked in my eyes
She said, what did you do?

Didnt know what she meant
What the hell did she mean
What could I have possibly done?

You robbed your youth
You fucked up again
So now, I cant help with this on

Why did I do this
What can I change
What made me feel this way?

You didn't hear your own voice
Only listened to me
And now, here it is...
Your last day

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