I woke up this morning and felt this strange emotion
This vibe throughout me that made me feel how it was strange that I was alive...
Another day
Just breathing...
Nothing to live for
He is not in my mind anymore
Which is okay
I’m glad I was able to rid of him finally
The course hours of screaming in his name still has left scars
However, I’ve covered them...
You can only see them ever so slightly
As I go through the hours of the day
School droning on and on and on...
It comes to my third hour class...
I stare at my piece of artwork I’m working on
The words covering the page in the shape of a pained soul
The dark and light contrasts wrap around me
And it becomes me
I soak it in and cry
Folding me hands over my face
The day of school ends
The sun in the middle of the sky...
And as I’m walking a dear friend tells me to not forget...
Remember, remember...
So lost...confused...
I pray to God for comfort
I feel so weak and broken
The darkness seeps in through the pours of my skin every day
And I feel it swarm inside me
This disease it grows just so slightly...
And it’s killing me
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'The words covering the page in the shape of a pained soul' i love this line.May i borrow it.I am joking.But i love your write,its so intense deep.Great work,thank for the comments btw.
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I really enjoyed reading this. I loved all of the emotion in this piece. I really liked the lines
He is not in my mind anymore
Which is okay
I’m glad I was able to rid of him finally
The course hours of screaming in his name still has left scars
I felt I could really relate to these lines. Awesome job. Keep writing. =D
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darkness is nothing to run from. sometimes embracing it makes you become more than you ever thought possible.
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i disagree
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pray tell why?
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if you embrace it you can get more lost than you ever thought was possible. why would anyone want to be lost?
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not surrender to it. embrace it. control the darkness, shape it to the way you want it. let it feed you, because if there's one thing to be known in this world, you can't live on light alone. remember, there's two sides to everything, and you can't have one without the other. there's definitely deep darkness in you, it's evident from your poetry. just control it, and realize you have to have it.
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