He doesn't know what it's like
He's the cause of my internal fight
I want to sceam and yell
I want to condemn him to hell
He needs to stop and think
In his mind, he needs to make a link
Figure out that it's wrong
That doing it doesn't make him belong
He knows that I'm here to help
But his heart just doesn't want to melt.
He feels like he's loved by none.
But love is given by some
But in the end, another one is lit
And i just can't take it.
He doesn't know what it's like
Because he causing my internal fight.
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Ranae Schwartz Age:15 Frome: Georgia, US
A contest entry
- Ages 14 and under: YOUR FAVORITE PREWRITE by Sky Prince Ireland.
800 points, ended December 15, 2008, 23 entries
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Comments
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Wow this is quite emotional. Thanks for sharing and entering my contest. Good luck to you.
Brian
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