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the demographix of another let down

If you want to change my life
There's just three words
Say that I love you
And I promise I'll go back to better days
Then me always saying this
Yet I still hate myself
Just another hourly day like this
Hypocrisy please show your face
Because every tear I cry says that I still love you
And the only way I can prove it to is on this stage
or this recording
I'm the let down you get from a romantic insomniac

Turn the book to another page
When you leave me on my alone again
And read out my death page
As I partake in my old ways
Hopeing all this will end in a simple drink
Cause I can't stand my own reflection
This my confliction with narsasstic vanity
So will you please change my life
Theres just three words
Say that I Love You
And I promise I'll go back to better days

So now I can hide that I hate myself
Along with the grotesque face in my reflection
My infirmity is the thing i call my life
Life Itself
These trenchs on my wrist
These greivances that i have
Bring on this pebbles on my face
But I still love you
So I guess I'll just stay in a fake undowncasted lie

So if you want to change my life
Just say three words

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  • Angel Eyed Baby
    November 18, 2008

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    I like I like I like!
    Great job hun. when ot comes to commenting on your writes it gets so hard cause I don't know what to say because they are all so good in my eyes.


    So if you want to change my life
    Just say three words

    I like how you ended it.
    Those three words are so powerful and can change ones life!

    You're such an amazing writer Joe and don't let anyone tell you different.
    Sorr if that sounds weird but hey just speaking the truth.