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Journey Out



Grain Of A million Lives
crashing Down, a blue scape of tomorrow.
Footprints in my soul, for these wave like dominos
eating an eternity, till we fall..
"Never again" We Sang.
Still. Unmerchantable resistance.
I cry for yesterdays' dreams.
That grain of a million lives.
Each victim passing by.
No warning sign, times up!
He's here..Goodbye.









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  • Scyphon
    November 24, 2008

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    Great imnagery, loved the domino effect.
    We should cry out more for the dreams of yesterday
    For they have all been forgotten by the unknown dreams of tomorrow.


  • PeopleNeverChange
    November 21, 2008
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    wow.....
    i love the domino line... eating an eternity..
    keep it up, its really powerful


  • silentemo
    November 19, 2008
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    i love it, i love it when it says footprints in my soul

  • subway emo
    November 17, 2008

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    It's purely metaphors,
    which is like amazing.
    I can only ever go as far as blatantly telling a story
    but yours is actually interperetable.