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I left my heart in that place we used to sit...

remember that place we used to sit
its pathetic
i admit
but fuck it oh fuck it

the cold on ours faces
the most amazing of places
all the pain it erases
held in all our embraces

the bench under the trees
the coldness of the breeze
oh kiss me just please
i dont care who sees

because in our own little world
your mine, i'm yours
your kiss was addictive
and there is no cures

i trip over everything you say
your lips take the pain away
but now its another day
it doesn't matter anyway...

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  • poet2angels gold member
    November 22, 2008
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    Great flow and rhyme
    Excellent...ty for entering

    Lynda


  • alexxx.la.reine
    November 17, 2008
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    *** are no cures

    my bad spelling mistake.