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Solitary love

When you called me I wept.
Bitterly.

This isn't the first time,
your voice ringing with sincerity,
you pulled me back.

Hooked.
A feeling of helplessness,
as you badger away my will.

And I condemn myself
to a solitary love.

Because you've never loved,
not me.

You enjoy my obedience,
relish in my hurt,
knowing I cannot leave.

And so you call me back
before I can get free.

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  • vitch
    September 28
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    Good one.

    Reminds me of one of my exs.


  • 2lullabyhaven
    November 19, 2008

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    Thanks for this entry, I feel that it speaks of that abusive kind of love, at any rate if it does it does it excellentlylol