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Don't give up, please?

~Just when we thought it couldn't get worse~


Every time I tell you to be strong
It gets a little worse.
Always at those crucial moments
When I try to convince you life has some worth.

And now I sit here,
With nothing else to say.
All I can do is try to help,
I want you get through day by day.

So please, do me a favor,
Don't give up.
I'm not gonna let you fall,
More pain? I think you've had enough.

[We're gonna show that bastard what you're made of.]

Author notes

I'm not gonna let you give up. Hell no. Never. We're gonna show that bastard who calls himself God that you're better than this. So much better.

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 21, 2008

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    one would think you were talking to them in this poem, but can only just sit and smile, i find myself on both sides of this poem, keep it flowing


  • DarknessOfSanity
    November 18, 2008

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    awwwww

    so sweet! i hope whoever it's for does alright, and i'm sure whoever it is will with a fantastic person like you at their side! we all need support, right? xD great write.


  • peregrin
    November 18, 2008

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    Thanks Hunny...
    I guess there is nothing left to do but fight...
    Thanks for caring.

    Gwen


  • patchgirl
    November 18, 2008
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    LOL.
    Remiinds me of Connie.
    I love it!
    *SCREAM OF EXCITMENT*


  • x-dont -ask-me-x
    November 17, 2008
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    I Love it!!! too too amazing.. I belive lots of us are doing that now a day

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