Please don't leave me....
I'm begging you not to go.
I'm sorry it's taken so long for me to tell you,
but I think you should know.
You are the smile forming to my lips,
the laugh that fills my lungs,
the glint that makes my blue eyes shine.
There are days where I wish you were mine.
I know this sounds strange,
and is probably quite a change,
but I need you to know.
Your eyes fill with laughter,
over something stupid I've said or done.
Once your smile shines, I know my game is won.
Your hugs get me through even my darkest of days.
Somehow, some way,
you're in all that I do,
and all I say.
When you're around I know no matter how bad,
everything will be okay.
I guess what I'm trying to say,
is that without you a piece of me
fades away.......
As I grasp to cling to what little
time I have left with you,
I need you to know,
if you must go.
I love you
A contest entry
- What Are You Feeling? by Simone Brooklyn.
1050 points, ended November 25, 2008, 33 entries
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Comments
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OH MY GODDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! gasp. it's beautiful, and is that about bubbles?
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Thank you, I put ALOT of thought into it. Yeah its about bubbles. I'm really going to miss him when he moves he really does mean alot to me.
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