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Summer Love

 

 

 

She sat by the open window
a sigh of despair left her lips

another day of rain,
clouds a uniform grey
her mood echoed the scene

she was restless, almost agitated
open books lay everywhere
but she couldn’t settle to read

her thoughts were with him,
the boy she met last summer

would he remember her
as she had remembered him?

tall, slim, gangly, but boy! could he kiss!
they had spent their days together
and had promised to write…

but promises are broken
aren’t they?


She hugged her knees
lost in daydreams
with a half smile on her lips
she hadn’t noticed the sun
glinting on the sea

but she heard the whistle
his whistle…familiar…haunting

and ran, barefoot
across the deck
to be swept up in his arms


twelve months faded away
as they kissed in the
sunshine after the rain

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Prompt is picture
credit to artist
Watercolor by Steve Hanks-Sunshine after the Rain

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  • JinSays gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    WOW! HOW BEAUTIFUL this is!
    Ohmy, you've stolen my heart, with this write of yours.
    I know this feeling, and I know that guy, and oh! That KISS.
    WOW,
    thank you so much for entering this contest, you've managed to hypnotize the hostess. . . .can that be good?

    I wish you all the best,
    Love,
    Jin


  • Dalaney gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    Sue, your heart and ability to pen romantic stories makes for wonderful poetry. Love, Lane


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 20, 2008

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    Aww... what a gorgeous tale! A summer romance rekindled. Beautiful Sue!


  • Rhythm Child
    November 19, 2008
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    im sure it will be amazing when it is done lol

  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 17, 2008
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    Let me know when it's done Sue

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