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Family Portrait ( Gold )

Pictures ...

in oval frames, they are tarnished,

burned copper, yet so fitting to the time.

 

Sepia, if memories serve me correctly,

of faces past.

Fading in milky hues

sunshine kissed.

 

Staring, I am sure I saw them move,

a family dressed in starch attire.

Stern expression's,

I wanted to see them smile.


Matriarch a maiden grandmother,

sat, hands folded upon knees

linen gown of colour I could only guess.

 

Men, her son's in uniform,

soldiers of war,

shall they return, for this I wondered often

records lay in dusty boxes in attic.

 

The farm hand, a Shepherd,

born to the century new,

his art captured 'four seasons'

still hanging, framed in guild.

 

Author notes

Close your eyes and tell me what you see"
First sight was the framed picture I have of my late Granddad and his family
He was my Hero.. my Teacher

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  • Abe 1
    November 20, 2008

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    i see it
    luv yr glances & how ya take us into this image
    wishin ya all de best me lady
    cheers abe


  • Midnite wolf gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    wow, another amazingly detailed insight into your memories, the imagery is as always amazing, good luck in the contest.


  • maralisa silver member
    November 19, 2008

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    oh julie a very beautiful poen your images are so wonderful as usual you have painted some delightful memeries held dear to many good luck inthe contest my freind take care *hug8maralisa


  • aboomer silver member
    November 18, 2008

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    Love it! Love the wording and images - brings tomind so many great memories, pictures that have great stories behind them.....
    best wishes in your contest.


  • daviscth silver member
    November 18, 2008

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    Oh my goodness!!! The imagery in this is splendid. I love your descriptions. You really brought it to life for me. Thanks so much for posting in my contest.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 18, 2008

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    Really wonderful write hun! I could envision the picture myself! Precious memory indeed.


  • Alyzeh
    November 18, 2008

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    Awww..this is so beautiful and gives such a warm feeling to the heart. Another stunning write Julie. I love how it gives you that 'homely' feeling...at the same time reminding you of your loved ones..So lovely.
    *tear* I miss my sisters...

    Thank you for sharing this with me..I'm nostalgic now..

    Love you,
    Alyzeh


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 17, 2008
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    Let me know when it's done

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