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Wind Song

 

Coming and going
At my own rate
Not being held back
Freedom is in my hand
Unstoppable

Dreams and visions
Are in my reach
The wind isn't held back
It comes with force
And doesn't care
Whether you like it or not
Sometimes it cries
But you must listen
Or you'll not hear it
The wind carries a song
And is never forgotten
It comforts you on a hot day
While bringing chills
When it's cold
Watch out
For it can either
Destory everything in its path
Or make pieces whole again
It sees and knows all things
Let me be one with the wind
Teaching what liberty really means

 

 

Author notes

Pic Prompt -

http://timseydell.deviantart.com/art/Softness-103885593

This is a old poem I rehashed. This poem got published in Allpoetrys book and I thought that it went perfect with this picture.

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Comments


  • Angelflower
    December 11, 2008

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    bravo! I loved the intensity in this write.. You did a wonderful job with the prompt.. Thank you very much for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.

    Angel


  • ylova
    December 11, 2008

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    Wow. This is superb! It does go very well with the picture. A brilliant write. Good luck to you in the contest

    Much love
    Ylova