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Lessons Learned

Sin and Vice.
This is my advice:
Never think twice.

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  • poetyaknoit
    December 7, 2008

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    haha nice! The only suggestion I'd have is to think up a different title... there are endless possibilities. It is VERY well constructed though. With such a short poem, I get so much out of it. Best of luck in the contest. Keep on writing, ~TC