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Love Replies

A random person is sitting down thinking to herself when love replies back.

Pull up a chair and listen...

 

Random Person Thinking -
How can I make him see how much he means to me?
Love answered back -
Just be yourself and not anyone else.

 

Random Person Thinking -
How can I be myself and what if he doesn't like me?
Love answered back -
If he doesn't accept you then it's not meant to be.

 

Random Person Thinking -
But I want him so bad it hurts inside.
Love answered back -
Don't be selfish. He might not be for you to begin with.

 

Random Person Thinking -
How is wanting him being selfish?
Love answered back -
"You must learn how to let go and if it's meant to be he'll come back."

 

Random Person Thinking -
How can I let go? What if I don't ever see him again?
Love answered back -
Then you must wait until the right one comes along. Love is selfless.

 

Random Person Thinking -
If the right person doesn't come along then what?
Love answered back -
Then you must look within yourself and find out why. Perhaps you're not as ready for love as you think you are.

 

Random Person Thinking -
Everytime I look within myself I see only him.
Love answered back -
That is when you must find the will power to let go and move on.

 

Random Person Thinking -
I have no will power.

Love answered back -
Then you aren't ready for him.

Author notes

Prompt - Random Lines of love

A contest entry

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Comments

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  • Hikari Lady
    December 24, 2008

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    This was amazing! It made me feel a mixture of emotions and every words rang so loudly in my mind.
    Wonderfully penned, a masterpiece indeed!

    Much love
    ~Noor


  • Angelflower
    December 11, 2008

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    wow, this was great. I'm actually speechless. I love this! it's so amazing! You did a great job with this prompt! thank you very much for sharing. best of luck in the contest.

    Angel


  • ylova
    December 11, 2008

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    Wow. I love this!!! Well done. A great take on the prompt! Nicely penned. Keep it flowing.

    Best wishes,
    Ylova


  • aboomer silver member
    November 18, 2008

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    I like this - I like how you've done the internal dialogue with yourself - your questions, your 'heart' answering.
    Nice job!
    best wishes in your contest.


  • ScreaminMime
    November 18, 2008

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    Roses are red,
    this poem has class.

    Stick it on the front page,
    or we'll have to kick ass...


  • Maatkara gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    Excellent interpretation from the prompt Very well done!


  • Victory Gin silver member
    November 17, 2008

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    This really good. The dialogue format worked nicely to communicate the wisdom in this piece. Totally reminds me of Gibran . I hope people can learn from this accessible piece of writing and ease their struggle a bit. It is a lesson we all must learn in order to find happiness.

    @};--,--


  • Cerulean Sunrise
    November 17, 2008
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    I like it.

    Sometimes I wish love would answer back. lol

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