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longing

I should of told you I loved you from the very first day

I should have told you that I needed you, needed you to stay

here in my arms where it's safe

there in your arms where it's safe

too many times passed, times passed

to let you know, I miss you

baby I love you.

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  • Joseph Hollis
    December 15, 2008

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    I can relate to this on a very personal level as well. Sometimes it feels like love is fleeting and we are seconds too late. Beautifully written. I enjoyed the presentation of this. It's not often you see right aligned poems.


  • ashley-dani
    November 17, 2008
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    This was a very beautiful poem.
    I can relate, for I have also felt this way before.