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UnDeAd AnD BrOKeN

say hello to this razorblade
hold it up close to my tearstreaked face
i will end myself without your love
sometimes the words just arent enough
i cant take hearing a lie from your perfect mouth
there are somethings i feel you are honest about
but i wanna give you my heart and make you my world
only want forever to be your girl
why pretend i dont care when its plain to see
you are the only one in the world for m e
and never again will i be alone
as long as you pick up the telephone
but you dont and here my skin meets
a knife to eager to slice to deep

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