a Neolithic lad most probably
cast the first skipping stone into a placid pond
his reflection
as if another
resided in the realm of rippled moments
that took his throw
and passed it on
to others
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Ripples, skipping stones...these images are rich for the thoughtful. Very nice poem.
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I like this view of the caveman bending low to inspect his wondrous visage for the first time. What rippled moments have spread out in time since then. A unique perspective you brought to the contest, thanks.
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A very well thought out piece, I love the history of man. This sums up so much about us with so little.
Great write.
No criticisms
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This is interesting... i also really like the title and whole piece itself. It reminds me of skipping stones as a child and mine would jusk go plonk an send ripples all over the lake. Great write
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Mmmm this is so interesting, great title and a deep write, the 5th line is gorgeous, I love alliteration and this is masterful.
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I read your title page and found you to be a courageous and free spirited person. How great to receive such a warm and encouraging response from you.
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I love the title of this and I also liked the wonderful imagery in your words. Its a wonderful and happy entry. Thank you for sharing with us.
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