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fog bound

Missing image
Fog envelopes her,
swirling eddy's encase her.   
There is no escape.
Sea weed and salt spray burn her,
driven by unending wind.
One more night in port.
tethered to an aging pier.
Her crew again drunk ashore.

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  • tibsy25
    July 7

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    moving

    I like this piece, i was unsure where it was going but love the fact the she is a boat?

    Thanks for sharing
    T


  • Jesann gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    A great write with wonderful imagery.
    I enjoyed this poem.
    Congratulations on the silver, well done.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 24, 2008
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    Wow...The imagery!!!!!Wow!

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    I think that you did a great job I love the first two lines thanks for sharing good luck in the contest be well


  • poetrandy
    November 17, 2008
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    Very good!

    Great take on FOG! Good luck in the contest!

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