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Artists

Painters of life
Dancers of destiny
Singers of love
Sculptors of memories
We are the artists
All of us

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  • The Fun House silver member
    November 22, 2008
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    Short, beautiful and makes an excellent point. Each line is strong and has just enough imgaery to let your mind find it's own source. Excellent.