You used to say you loved me
to at least pretend you cared
Now that all thats over I see
I have to say the words I never dared.
You used to run your hands through my hair
you used to whisper that it'll all be fine
now my head stabs with pain at the pull
my ears echo with my own screams
Yesterday you loved me
Today you just don't care
and Tommorow I'll be gone
Yesterday lives forever in memory
Today will give me strength
and Tommorow dies as I remember the words
"I Love You"
Author notes
Promt 2-"Tomorrow dies as i remember the words 'I Love You' " Ken-Maverick
A contest entry
- WRITE! by luna-midnight.
700 points, ended December 16, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
-
Ouch. Ken's quote hits you hard.
I liked this, it's so bitter in nature...I don't want to believe in it. =( But it's so true. Reality does bite hard. Sigh.
I loved this, it made me think of things I didn't want to.
Great write my friend. Thank you for entering and good luck to you in the contest.
Love,
Alyzeh
-
They are such strong words "I Love You" arnt they?
This is a biiter sweet poem my friend
Nice rhyme and flow aswell
Thanks for entering and all the best to you in the contest
Ken
Adding your comment:
