What did I do last night?
Most people don't come out alive
After asking that question
But because I'm in a good mood
I think I might tell you
She was walking down the alley
Unaware that she wasn't alone
I was on the roof behind her
Ready to jump
And make my mark on her
Timing her movements, I jumped
Down 4 stories on top of her
My knife ready in my hands
Drawn back and ready to strike
Now is the time
She heard me jump
She turned just in time
For the blade to go through her face
She dropped immeadiatly without a sound
As the blade pierced through her brain
Now to dispose of the body
Decisions, decisions
The dumpster or the forest?
But wait, I have a better idea
Something I would enjoy much more
I cut off her limbs, one by one
And put them through the blender
Both me and the room are soon covered in blood
But I don't care
To me, the blood is just a trophy
I took all the remains
Out to a secluded lake
And poured them in
The fish instantly began to eat them
As I smiled with great satisfaction
Well, now that you have heard this
I'm going to have to kill you
What's that? I said I wouldn't kill you?
I said that most don't come out alive
And unfortunatly, You are one of the 'most'
Author notes
I think this is by far, one of my best poems. And I wrote it at 6:30 am in 20 minutes. So if you are ever bored, just write about some guy killing something. I've also noticed that I always seem to be killing a chick... BUt just to make Ryan happy, Dani is awesome
A contest entry
- An Elegant Murder by misterfish.
700 points, ended December 5, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
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wow great job.
so harsh and violent.
i love the way u think.haha.
keep on rockin!
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Hmmmm my kind of poem. And if you can write this in twenty minuets then I am very impressed. Well done.
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haha, thanks, I appreciate it. I think all of my poems have been written in 20 or less minutes...except for the tandem with Dani
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Very nice...I like it. It doesn't spend hours describing the gore. It lacks a little in sucking me in, but maybe thats just me...I like the title. Nice touch
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awesome work josh...nice an lol...
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One word
NICE.
Have i ever told you that i think your awesome?
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