is it time
to close doors
shut out thoughts
leave ghosts
to float freely
along halls
of yesterday's lies
indecision rattles
these bones, confused
perhaps tomorrow
will bring silence
Author notes
Prompt: perhaps
In a list
A contest entry
- perhaps by going nowhere.
1400 points, ended November 18, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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perhaps... and i hope so... indecision is one of those things that can just tear away... along with the what ifs. well done. thank you
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anytime anytime
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so many intricate uses and ideas of perhaps. A very crafty concept by our lovely judge don't you think? wonderful poem... good luck in contest hun!
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I enjoy writing for the prompts that 'going nowhere' seems to come up with.
Thanks for the read & the comment
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How beautifully strong and deep...lovely ending saying so much and if silence does not come, I am sure it will just scream louder...well done as always...a pleasure...
mystic
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And perhaps it will just surface again...renamed???
C
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