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All I can say.

I walk down the hallway and stop at the back of the room
I looked around and noticed that every seat was filled with gloom
I seen a box sitting in front of all the seats
I heard a mother crying why didn't you wait on me
I was not ready to say good bye willingly
There are many things that I know
But there are some things I don't
God they say works in mysterious ways.

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  • blueyez
    March 12

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    This was nice and heartfelt... fairly sad, I do however think if you're going to rhyme you should make the whole poem rhyme not just the beginning...