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With a chisel you abrade the barricade that stands at full command, 
possessing the antibodies to fight off anything but you; it’s one and only addiction.

You’re the crack pipe it smokes with a ten second high, the metal piece that creates a longing for more.
The pain I forget to remember and then forget to disregard.
You’re the paper cut and nails on a chalkboard.
A kick in the ribs and a sprained ankle.
You’re a stubbed toe with tremendous throbbing.
Your inevitable and excruciating.

With a chisel you abrade the barricade that stands at full command,
Smiling as your burry the dignity I have left.

I am the tentacles which have latched on to minute qualities of righteousness.
The tears which paint my body black,
I am the salt that burns my open wounds.
I am the salt that burns your open wounds.
The wounds that you have chiselled upon my skin.

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  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    I could have sworn I commented on this poem!!

    Anyway... I love the imagery you use here. The way you make everything so negative...

    And it's so sad...I feel.