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Please

We're all addicts of our own control
Though it may not seem as though
But we all are I say with ease
May I admit I'm an addict please

Drugs and vices are left to turn
And after each mistake we pray we learn
But who here can stand up with me
And say they are addicts please

Admittance is all but a single step, taken back, not often kept
But I'll step up if you'll help me, Because I know I'm addicted. please.


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Addicts is my seven letter A word.

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  • The Fun House silver member
    November 22, 2008

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    Good point and too true. I think we all forget that addictions can be many things. From having to have that cup of coffee the morning to washing our hands excessively. We are all addicted to something or even someone. Well done!