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Laid to Rest

Blood still flows
From these healed wounds
The blade's put away
But I'm still not soothed

With these fading scars
It's still hard to fake
Like a car at top speed
That's built without brakes

This pain's a constant
But the addiction is dead
Self-mutilation
Has been laid to rest

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  • BlAcKAmythest AnG3l
    November 27, 2008

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    wonderful

    i rly liked it. i thought it was beautifully written and filled with pure emotion and devotion. wonderful write. its easy to relate to something like that. umm there is nothing i would change.i thought it was rly gd the way it is.


  • Lonely Christina
    November 17, 2008

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    name in authors notes. "Blood still flows
    From these healed wounds
    The blade's put away
    But I'm still not soothed" wow this is filled with truth and emotion. thanks 4 entering