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Fog

As I walk down the street
a serious fog is my future
in front of me. 
It's mystery surrounds me.

I turn to look back
as I continue on my path,
and the misty fog is
crawling all  around me
like ghosts from
  my past still
embracing me.




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  • poetrandy
    November 17, 2008
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    Good stuff!

    Neat, enticing image! Good luck in the contest!