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My Bella

I walked into school one day
And saw a girl who could have taken my breath away.
She was beautiful and mystifying
And left my mouth in a crazy tongue-tying.

There was something about her that I couldn't figure out.
Her mind was closed to me and that made me pout.
She smelled oh-so-delicious
But I knew I could not get vicious.

I glared at her and tried everything;
Resisting that temptation to spring.
Eventually I disappeared
And I'm sure she thought me to be so weird.

When I came back and saw her
I decided to be the guy anyone would prefer.
I smiled and was kind;
I stayed extremely resigned.

She eventually found me charming
And I finally was not alarming.
We started hanging out
And soon there was no doubt.

I loved this girl with all my heart
It gave my life another start.
She found out I wasn't human
But she didn't mind that I was some kind of superhuman.

The first time I kissed her
I couldn't believe that she'd actually prefer
To spend her time with me;
The one people ran from like I was some banshee.

She loved me, too and it was fair
Some God had answered my sweet prayer.
I'd asked for someone to love forever
And here I finally had someone clever.

But I had to hurt her one day
And I can believe I went away.
I knew she loved me no matter what
And so I came back to heal her cut.

We went through so much together
In every kind of weather.
We soon were married and had a daughter;
She was just as lovely as water.

We fought to keep her alive
Because the Volturi were bound to arrive.
***will finish later***

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Almost done - the rhyming is quite forced, but I hope you still like it.

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  • M.e.l.i.s.a.u.r
    December 4, 2008
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    is this based on twilight???


    • Crazy9Piano8Freak
      December 5, 2008
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      Yes but I'm not done with it yet - I haven't been in the mood to write or do anything on here for a while.


  • TwoFacedPsycho
    November 17, 2008

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    Wonderful summary of such invigorating books. It's truly a glorious story we all love to hear. Too bad I already know what's going to happen, yet I haven't even finished the second book! Great work!