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Miasma









comes the dream haze
settling on every street.

It casts a gauzy light
beneath its dewy touch
veiled promises shine
with the rising of Sol.



A contest entry

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  • poetrandy
    November 17, 2008
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    Very good facsimile!

    Great take on FOG! Good luck in the contest!