Musty Air in the cold morning
I was at ends with myself
Then I saw my Heavenly Sue
My eyes brightened up with glee
My dad was holding her in his arms
I was so happy
She took away my worries and stress
those sweet little green eyes
looking back to me
saying are you mine
Author notes
What do you think.
A contest entry
- I Have To Have It by storiesuntold.
475 points, ended November 30, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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very sweet poem. love it. keep writing!
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I have a cat that can that makes me feel the same way.
Very nice :-) -
Lovely write
So true are the way their eyes speek to us in ways no human can I love this poem . I have lived this myself and I can even now feel the racing of my heart the day I met my first loving pet
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this is such a cute poem. the way you describe your pet is nice.
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